don't worry, I'm a professional ([info]fallen_arazil) wrote,
@ 2008-03-24 15:27:00
Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend  Next Entry
Current mood: dark
Entry tags:fic:[torchwood]

Dedicated to [info]karaokegal
Currently Untitled Jack/Gwen-ish Fic
Characters
: Jack/Gwen, Tosh
Rating: R for nudity
Word Count: ~540
Author's Notes: This is both an experiment and the first part in a longer fic series I am considering writing. For now it can stand on it's own, but I wanted to explore the darker aspects of these characters, the things that make them fit so well into an organization like Torchwood.



"It isn't what you think," Gwen had told her, the collar of her shirt sliding slowly over her shoulder, unnoticed, showing the impression of a strap from the bra that she was no longer wearing.

"I don't think anything about it." Toshiko replied, not looking away from her computer screen, her finger's dancing over the keyboard without thought. "There's few things I think about less than who Jack is sleeping with from month to month. He seems to think of it as a management style."

"That's what-- we're not sleeping together. It was just a kiss, Tosh."

Toshiko glanced at Gwen long enough to gaze pointedly at her bare shoulder, and Gwen tugged her shirt back together, pink-cheeked. "All right, maybe it was a bit more than a kiss. You know what Jack is like, it wasn't something I planned, and I can't have Rhys find out--"

"What you and Jack do is your business." Tosh cut her off, turning back to the computer. "Stop trying to make it my concern and I won't treat it like it is."

Gwen bit her lip; Tosh could see the expression out of the corner of her eye, Gwen's straight, blunt teeth digging into her already swollen, kiss-stung bottom lip, as if considering the truth of Tosh's words.

"Please don't say anything." Gwen murmured at last, before drifting out of the building still slightly dazed, like a ghost.

She had the video file up on her screen when Jack came up behind her, and he watched with absent interest as the image of himself cupped one of Gwen's breasts, Gwen's head rolling against the brick wall of his office, her hands clutching at his shoulders, bunching up his powder blue dress shirt, one of Jack's braces hanging loose down his arm. Tosh had the recording inching forward at half speed, the resolution good enough that you could see the tip of Jack's pink tongue lovingly circle Gwen's nipple.

"I thought I had managed to disable all of all the cameras in my office." Jack said, almost idly, the sound of him sipping his coffee loud in the empty space. Tosh grinned in quiet pleasure at the comment.

"I have a mobile surveillance unit set to sweep the perimeter after standard hours. It records any unexpected motion and uploads the file to my hard disk." She glanced at Jack through her eyelashes, teasingly coy. "Someone has to know everything that's going on around here."

Jack only sipped on his coffee once more, his eyes locked on the pale expanse of Gwen's throat bared on Tosh's screen, as if perhaps he had been too preoccupied before to fully appreciate the sight.

They watched the rest of the file in silence, until Tosh herself appeared on the screen, looking innocent and embarrassed at walking in on their clinch, the files in her hands falling to the floor and scattering around her feet as she backed out of the room.

"Don't work too late, Tosh." Jack said, turning away, as on the screen he carefully straightened his hair with his fingers and resettled his braces, his back to Gwen as she fumbled with the buttons on her shirt.




(7 comments) - (Post a new comment)


[info]jadesfire2808
2008-03-24 08:48 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, I'd love to see some more writers on my flist take up Torchwood :) Your Tosh voice is great - tight, knowing and calm, and I like unflappable, unembarrassed Jack. Feels just right for all of them. I love the bit about watching Gwen as though he'd missed her the first time round. Feels very Jack. I'm intrigued to see where you take it.

Just one bit of concrit - don't know if you're going for British terminology or not, but what you call 'suspenders', we call 'braces'. Over here, suspenders are what you hold up your stockings with. Having said that, I'm getting all kinds of fun mental images for Jack, so I kind of hate to point it out ;D

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]fallen_arazil
2008-03-24 09:00 pm UTC (link)
Your Tosh voice is great - tight, knowing and calm

I think Tosh in this is mostly inspired by one single scene--you know the one where Toch is hacking into some computer system and she says, sort of low and lovingly, 'Come on, guys, why don't you try to make it a challenge for me?" or something to that effect. (I can never remember exact lines or eps) I still think that was one of the single hotest things she's ever done, and that's the kind of Tosh I want to see more of--and therefore want to write.

unflappable, unembarrassed Jack

OMG YES. I completely believe that this would be Jack's reaction to finding out that Tosh had recoded him having sex/groping someone/jerking off/etc.

Thanks for the BritCrit. I really ought to know these things, seeing as how my mum is English, but honestly, the proper term for suspenders rarely comes up these days. Unless you're Jack, I mean. =P

~Djinn

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]rivers_bend
2008-03-24 09:08 pm UTC (link)
I love Tosh. And I love how you show her here. I wish we'd get more of that in show.

You're making me want to icon her *g*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]fallen_arazil
2008-03-25 03:21 am UTC (link)
Well, she's hot, she's smart, she sweet, and I think that she's secretly a lot more devious than she lets on. I mean, she's able to access any closed circuit television network pretty much at will; you know that she has to take advantage of that. But the way she acted when she had the telepathy pendant shows that she's not willing to just watch and then let others take care of things--she wants to act, as well, which is wear the fascination starts with me. She's not the tech support that stays back at the office, she's also the one with a scanner in one hand and a gun in the other. GUH.

~Djinn

ETA: Also, I know you probably meant that you wanted to create an icon of her yourself, but if you would like a Tosh icon, feel free to take any of these:



Edited at 2008-03-25 05:08 am UTC

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]karaokegal
2008-03-24 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! Hot hot hot! Jack/Gwen action. OH BABY! And voyueur Tosh? dedicated to me? How cool is that? Can't wait for more, more, more.

Just one more episode (next week) and I'll be able to start writing Tosh/John fic for you. And Martha/Gwen. I promise, I will come back from Maui with something just for you.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]fallen_arazil
2008-03-25 03:29 am UTC (link)
Hot hot hot! Jack/Gwen action.

Heh, don't get to excited. I am adamantly not a Jack/Gwen shipper, and therefore, if I continue writing as I plan to, will utterly destroy their relationship. Then again, I'm sure you won't mind that too much. ^_^

voyueur Tosh?

I was seeing Tosh as less of a voyeur and more of a snoop, in the sense that she wasn't really enjoying watching them, but either one works. ^_^ Again, if I manage to continue this as I would like too, these things will become more clear.

dedicated to me?

Yes--because I know you're into the J/G (even if only as a remedy for J/I), because I plan to abuse the characters muchly (which always makes me think of you) and of course, because I love you. *kiss*

~Djinn

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]karaokegal
2008-03-25 03:49 am UTC (link)
Destruction of J/G is fine. (As long as it doesn't lead to you know what.) Looking forward to all the abuse. Jack definitely has some pain coming.

Love you too babe!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


(7 comments) - (Post a new comment)

Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Login w/ OpenID
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…